[Rin isn't the type to overly coddle or sugarcoat things. She's blunt in a way most would find rude or insensitive.]
You didn't have confidence in yourself, and I think you didn't have a clear focus on your goals and reason for being in my shop. I think you need to work on your purpose and your conviction. Beyond that, instead of filling in the blanks with what this lady should have been interested in, you did it with pieces of yourself. It made it even easier to pick you out.
[Ah, but Rin cannot criticize her entirely. How could she when Gray's hair is so cute and perfect? Reaching out, like she had in during the Oracle, Rin runs her fingers along the ends of Gray's hair.]
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[Rin isn't the type to overly coddle or sugarcoat things. She's blunt in a way most would find rude or insensitive.]
You didn't have confidence in yourself, and I think you didn't have a clear focus on your goals and reason for being in my shop. I think you need to work on your purpose and your conviction. Beyond that, instead of filling in the blanks with what this lady should have been interested in, you did it with pieces of yourself. It made it even easier to pick you out.
[Ah, but Rin cannot criticize her entirely. How could she when Gray's hair is so cute and perfect? Reaching out, like she had in during the Oracle, Rin runs her fingers along the ends of Gray's hair.]
This is a really cute style for you.